The#2RY
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Ok, well the first chapter's actually not to good, but here it is anyway...
This is my story, I will not tell you my name, I was in this adventure, close friends with...well you'll find out, but this began where all legends start, the begining...
Chapter 1:
The begining
The small village of Lieth, in the huge land of Ronith is full of the most unexpected heros, the story begins at a young 20 year old boys home, his name was Khris, he lived with his brother, Rane, Khris was dressed in a vest and ripped up trousers, Rane sat in his chair, jealous of his young brother, and bossed him around most of the time, Khris, at the age of 17, became master of Lightning.
Rane, in his own words, says he will get 'revenge' on his brother for 'causing him a lot of pain,
a few days later however, people knocked on Khris's door, and this is where the story begins...
At the door was a short, chubby, spotty man, most of his cheeks were covering hi mouth, he was dressed in a suit and asked Khris a simple question, "Is Rane there?", it took Khris about 10 seconds to answer "Uuh, he's busy at the moment." said Khris slowly, but the man rubbed his head and pulled out a scrool of paper "I, Chub the III, have been ordered by Sage Gong to collect Rane and take him to the elemental mountain." the man looked at Khris and Khris blinked and tried to get words out of his mouth "Uuuh, I'l go and get him, but I don't think he'll be happy." said Khris as he turned around and ran up the stairs to a narrow corridor with two doors, one of them had cuts and chips in it, the other was perfect, Khris went to the ruined door and knocked.
Khris went in and saw rain sitting in his seat with his back turned and feet on the table "What do you want!?" snapped Rane
"Well, a man called Chub the III is at the door.." before Khris could finish Rane interupted
"So?" Rane looked back at Khris
"He says Sage Gong wants to meet you at the Elemental Mountain." said Khris as he went out of the door and started cleaning the floor, Rane however got out of his seat and peeked out of the window and looked at the poor village "Maybe this is my chance to become and Elemantal Master!" said Rane walking out of the wooden door and down the stairs kicking over the bucket Khris was using to clean the floor with, he went to the door and saw Chub "Hello, I'm Rane, you wanted me?"
Rane looked down at Chub trying not to laugh "Yeth, I am taking you to Elemental Mountain, please, go in to the carrage and wait for me." Chub looked up at the tall Rane and smiled, Rane looked at Khris "I expect this floor to be done when I get back." Rane went to the carrage and sat in the back and waited for Chub.
Rane got back from Elemental Mountain and walked in the door, really proud, the only thing was, Khris was asleep, but Rane didn't care...
Rane ran up the stairs and pushed Khris's door open and pulled him out of bed "Guess what shrimp, no more 'Master of Lightning, we love you', because from now on, I'm the new Master of Rain, andthere's no way I'm going to be hated by one Liethen!" Khris looked at Rane in surprise "Ok, that's nice." Khris got up and went back into his bed and Rane went in to his room and left Khris alone.
The next morning, it was pouring of rain wich wasn't usuall to happen in Lieth, Khris went downstairs and heard lots of chattering noises, like feet, a lot of feet, walking across the floor, Khris went outside and saw people running away from something, Khris stepped outside and looked out to the hills and saw a lot of people marching, people made of water, he heard a familiar voice shouting "Halt!" Khris saw all of the people stop and put their hands by their sides, he then heard the voice again "Charge!" then the ground started shaking and the army started charging and then Khris knew who the voice belonged to, it was Rane....
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.:To Be Continued:.
This is my story, I will not tell you my name, I was in this adventure, close friends with...well you'll find out, but this began where all legends start, the begining...
Chapter 1:
The begining
The small village of Lieth, in the huge land of Ronith is full of the most unexpected heros, the story begins at a young 20 year old boys home, his name was Khris, he lived with his brother, Rane, Khris was dressed in a vest and ripped up trousers, Rane sat in his chair, jealous of his young brother, and bossed him around most of the time, Khris, at the age of 17, became master of Lightning.
Rane, in his own words, says he will get 'revenge' on his brother for 'causing him a lot of pain,
a few days later however, people knocked on Khris's door, and this is where the story begins...
At the door was a short, chubby, spotty man, most of his cheeks were covering hi mouth, he was dressed in a suit and asked Khris a simple question, "Is Rane there?", it took Khris about 10 seconds to answer "Uuh, he's busy at the moment." said Khris slowly, but the man rubbed his head and pulled out a scrool of paper "I, Chub the III, have been ordered by Sage Gong to collect Rane and take him to the elemental mountain." the man looked at Khris and Khris blinked and tried to get words out of his mouth "Uuuh, I'l go and get him, but I don't think he'll be happy." said Khris as he turned around and ran up the stairs to a narrow corridor with two doors, one of them had cuts and chips in it, the other was perfect, Khris went to the ruined door and knocked.
Khris went in and saw rain sitting in his seat with his back turned and feet on the table "What do you want!?" snapped Rane
"Well, a man called Chub the III is at the door.." before Khris could finish Rane interupted
"So?" Rane looked back at Khris
"He says Sage Gong wants to meet you at the Elemental Mountain." said Khris as he went out of the door and started cleaning the floor, Rane however got out of his seat and peeked out of the window and looked at the poor village "Maybe this is my chance to become and Elemantal Master!" said Rane walking out of the wooden door and down the stairs kicking over the bucket Khris was using to clean the floor with, he went to the door and saw Chub "Hello, I'm Rane, you wanted me?"
Rane looked down at Chub trying not to laugh "Yeth, I am taking you to Elemental Mountain, please, go in to the carrage and wait for me." Chub looked up at the tall Rane and smiled, Rane looked at Khris "I expect this floor to be done when I get back." Rane went to the carrage and sat in the back and waited for Chub.
Rane got back from Elemental Mountain and walked in the door, really proud, the only thing was, Khris was asleep, but Rane didn't care...
Rane ran up the stairs and pushed Khris's door open and pulled him out of bed "Guess what shrimp, no more 'Master of Lightning, we love you', because from now on, I'm the new Master of Rain, andthere's no way I'm going to be hated by one Liethen!" Khris looked at Rane in surprise "Ok, that's nice." Khris got up and went back into his bed and Rane went in to his room and left Khris alone.
The next morning, it was pouring of rain wich wasn't usuall to happen in Lieth, Khris went downstairs and heard lots of chattering noises, like feet, a lot of feet, walking across the floor, Khris went outside and saw people running away from something, Khris stepped outside and looked out to the hills and saw a lot of people marching, people made of water, he heard a familiar voice shouting "Halt!" Khris saw all of the people stop and put their hands by their sides, he then heard the voice again "Charge!" then the ground started shaking and the army started charging and then Khris knew who the voice belonged to, it was Rane....
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.
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.:To Be Continued:.